tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205328.post116484655955764042..comments2023-12-24T09:25:20.924-06:00Comments on American at heart: So I've had it...Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16140003549240348287noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205328.post-1165146082823479002006-12-03T05:41:00.000-06:002006-12-03T05:41:00.000-06:00The only suggestion I have is to split up the thir...The only suggestion I have is to split up the third paragraph into two, maybe three paragraphs. When a paragraph gets to long it becomes counter-productive to the argument. I know it's all one idea, but it's a psychological thing. That's why we have paragraphs in the first place, to make the absorbtion process easier on our brains. I can't pick out the appropriate points to break it because it all rolls together well, but if you can find a way to logically split it up, I think it would strengthen the piece.<BR/><BR/>P.S. Aren't Democrats just a bunch of unmotivated citizens with no knowledge of politics anyway?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com